Forces Of The Sea Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Forces Of The Sea

Rating: 5.0


The calm sea embraces you
With its skin like silk
That exudes warmth
As the loving embrace
Of a great friend.

But when the wind
Kisses the sea ferociously
It turns into a beast
It embraces you like cobra
Suffocates you to death.


Copyright 2022, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 15 June 2022

Yeah it is true about the sea. Beautiful ink.

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Anjandev Roy 16 June 2022

Excellent work.....as usual.....thank u, dear poetess...

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Lovely poem. Presents to two divergent faces of the sea most aesthetically. The metaphors are fantastic and colourful. Loved it. Top score

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 16 June 2022

An Amazing poem Rose-Marie Bravo! ! !

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Loved this poem, my dearest friend Rose. Remain blessed.......100

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Wonder, how i missed this marvellous poem. A loving embrace of a good friend is so rejuvenating.

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Richard Wlodarski 17 June 2022

Reading this amazing poem reminds me of Jack Kerouac. He would have loved it. And would have desribed it as perfectly, and eloquently, as you. I know because of having read his 1st book, titled THE SEA IS MY BROTHER. Excellent poem!

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M. Asim Nehal 16 June 2022

Sea as a blessings and sea as a punishment, in both ways it fascinates. Nice poem.5*****

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The warmth and death the sea can offer are beyond anything blissful but for the suffocation and for the resultant death. The sea is like that, the sea of everything is like that, sea of joy or the sea of suffering. What a deep thought. To my poem list

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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