Sunday, January 18, 2009

Forest Of Angels Comments

Rating: 5.0

I long to breathe the warm air of the summer
Giving me life and the flowers around,
Wherever I look I see colours and beauty
Reaching for miles on the mosaic ground.
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Deborah Cromer 03 August 2009

What a beautiful stroll through a lovely poem. Very enjoyable to read. DC

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Reshma Ramesh 25 January 2009

beautiful................beautiful...........

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C.R. Clark 25 January 2009

A lovely write, Andrew, captivating from start to finish. Beautiful imagery...10++ Best wishes, my friend Richard

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Alison Cassidy 22 January 2009

I love the way you have broken up the rhythm of this wonderful poem. It adds a heightened dramatic intensity to the scansion and really makes the reader listen. Your title too is superb - what a beautiful metaphor. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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As usual Andrew this is absolutely lovely. Your rhyme pattern was interesting too! It is so good to review an enfolding, structured yet free poem as this.....Karin Anderson

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Bonnie Collins 19 January 2009

What a tranquil way you have with your paintings Andrew.... This is written so beautfully, and echos all the summer's wind upon my face.... You have a magnificent way with words, your imagery is absolutly heaven.... Bonnie

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Vaibhav Pandey 19 January 2009

So soothing.......you produce musical environment through your poems. great as always 10

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Greenwolfe 1962 19 January 2009

I agree with Kumar Ray. A true poet. A beautiful vision you describe. I want to go with you. GW62

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Lynda Robson 19 January 2009

A beautifully worded poem Andrew, it flows like a mountain stream, the beauty of nature depicted so well by you, Lynda xx 10+++

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Tsira Goge 19 January 2009

It is very beautiful, when I read your verses, I feel as though the mountain wind blows in face, me....10. Best wishes, Tsira

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Sandra Fowler 18 January 2009

Forest of angels what a superb metaphor. You have raised your love of nature to the level of fine art.10 without hesitation. Warm regards, Sandra

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Duncan Wyllie 18 January 2009

These magnificent creations reminding you of the grace and beauty as soft as Angels whispers as the wind brushes against them Beautiful work again from someone who has taught me much about fine poetry Take care Andrew Love duncan X

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Brandon Dugan 18 January 2009

very nice created a great mental picture in my head keep up the good work

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