I long to breathe the warm air of the summer
Giving me life and the flowers around,
Wherever I look I see colours and beauty
Reaching for miles on the mosaic ground.
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A lovely write, Andrew, captivating from start to finish. Beautiful imagery...10++ Best wishes, my friend Richard
I love the way you have broken up the rhythm of this wonderful poem. It adds a heightened dramatic intensity to the scansion and really makes the reader listen. Your title too is superb - what a beautiful metaphor. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
As usual Andrew this is absolutely lovely. Your rhyme pattern was interesting too! It is so good to review an enfolding, structured yet free poem as this.....Karin Anderson
What a tranquil way you have with your paintings Andrew.... This is written so beautfully, and echos all the summer's wind upon my face.... You have a magnificent way with words, your imagery is absolutly heaven.... Bonnie
So soothing.......you produce musical environment through your poems. great as always 10
I agree with Kumar Ray. A true poet. A beautiful vision you describe. I want to go with you. GW62
A beautifully worded poem Andrew, it flows like a mountain stream, the beauty of nature depicted so well by you, Lynda xx 10+++
It is very beautiful, when I read your verses, I feel as though the mountain wind blows in face, me....10. Best wishes, Tsira
Forest of angels what a superb metaphor. You have raised your love of nature to the level of fine art.10 without hesitation. Warm regards, Sandra
These magnificent creations reminding you of the grace and beauty as soft as Angels whispers as the wind brushes against them Beautiful work again from someone who has taught me much about fine poetry Take care Andrew Love duncan X
very nice created a great mental picture in my head keep up the good work
What a beautiful stroll through a lovely poem. Very enjoyable to read. DC