Forever Together Poem by Rini Shibu

Forever Together

Rating: 4.8


Night is light
So perfect and bright
Diamonds and sparks
Glittering in the dark
Dreams are flying
And moon is spying
With wine in the glass
As we knit love on the grass
There is nothing much better
Than to live with you forever

Sunday, July 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: forever
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Practicing Poetess 29 July 2018

A poem of sweet appeal! :)

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Lamar Cole 29 July 2018

This is a very wonderful poem about forever together.

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Aqua Flower 09 August 2018

As we knit love on the grass Love this line! An exceptional write about love and the connection it makes! 10++++++++

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Cheryl Tutaan 09 August 2018

As we knit love on the grass... Loved this sweet love poem, it brings butterflies to my stomach... :) ♡ Thank you for always writing such beautiful poem, Rini. ++++++++++10. Cheryl♡

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 July 2018

As we knit love on the grass.......fabulous imagination! A lovely poem! Thanks dear Rini or sharing.......10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 July 2018

Amusing expression. Interesting to read each line. Most impressive lines are..... There is nothing much better Than to live with you forever Brilliant one.10

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Akhtar Jawad 29 July 2018

Such a lovely poem that its reader starts dreaming to live with a loved one for ever.

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