Forget And Fly Poem by Rini Shibu

Forget And Fly

Rating: 5.0


It beats so fast
Like drum so hard
It may burst in pain
As it always strain
They say stay in peace
But still stress increase
Then You wish to cry
Better forget everything and fly

Saturday, October 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: stress
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Binayakumar Mohanty 20 October 2018

Forget everything and fly.Is it so easy dear poet? Nicely crafted poem.loved it.Thanks for sharing.

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A fan 20 October 2018

They say stay in peace But still stress increase....so true! beautifully penned!

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 October 2018

But it is very difficult sometimes to forget. That should be done though to have a good life. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Unnikrishnan E S 20 October 2018

Hi Rini, A life away from strife, stress is what everyone looks for. But do we find it?

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 August 2022

Readers would pay attention to your last couple of lines!

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Carl Roussell 31 October 2018

Don't let the stress get to you - A 10.

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Lamar Cole 20 October 2018

Great poem about forget and fly.

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Kostas Lagos 20 October 2018

Ready to spread my wings! Perfect 10!

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Susheela Shiju 20 October 2018

well penned dear Rini!

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