Forgiven (Haiku) Poem by Howard The Motivational Poet Simon

Forgiven (Haiku)

Rating: 4.7


When my sinfulness
Collides with God's righteousness
It's a no contest

Monday, June 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: inspirational
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 15 June 2015

We must forgive ourselves in order to be totally forgiven

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Hazel Durham 07 June 2015

Powerful message in this wonderful write!

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Lyn Paul 08 June 2015

This is certainly powerful. But How can we really forgive those who are evil. What are these people? They have no love in there heart.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 June 2015

A meaningful Haiku nicely and aptly presented. Well done, thanks.

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Now, If only we could convince demon terror groups such as Isis and hellbound leaders such as Li'l Kim and Putin to heed your words of truth...Perhaps we could promise our children a better worls coming soon...Good Write, Howard...~FjR~

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 September 2018

A brilliant write with its simplicity. A meaningful message. So very true.10+++

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Susan Williams 22 May 2018

Yes! ! ! You conquered the inherent brevity of a Haiku and made it deliver a tome of wisdom in a wry but reverential way. 10+++++++++++

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Valsa George 03 February 2016

You have hit the nail on the head....... Without verbosity, you have eloquently brought out the essence of God's boundless love.......! Call this a Senryu, not a Haiku!

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Nosheen Irfan 27 January 2016

The spirit of forgiveness is indeed divine. We mortals can always count on God's limitless benevolence. Well said.

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Roseann Shawiak 01 September 2015

Definitely no contest there, not ever! You have touched upon the truth of goodness in this poem, meaningful and energizing in it's essence. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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