~ Forgotten Old Cabin Poem by Adeline Foster

~ Forgotten Old Cabin

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~ Forgotten Old Cabin

A forgotten old cabin at sunset,
Whose chinks have loosened and fell,
Only a few miles from the city,
But how many tales it could tell.
Built by the hands of a husband
Who brought his bride here to dwell.
Of children who played on the doorstep,
A family that changed through the years,
Of birth, joy, laughter, and singing,
Yes, also, death, sorrow, and tears.

If an old cabin could remember
The warmth that it gave from the cold,
The shade of the tree in the front yard,
Its branches now twisted and old,
Would it speak once more of its loved ones,
And stories that never were told?
We gave it a family at sunset,
For we saw its beauty, of course,
But it’s just a forgotten old cabin,
No feelings, no hopes no remorse.

Monday, September 30, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: poem,nostalgia
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
First publication The Frederick News-Post,
Frederick Md.., Feb..1980
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lorraine Colon 30 September 2013

What stories old buildings could tell. Very nice poem.

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Andrew Blakemore 05 October 2013

A lovely and very descriptive write

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 05 October 2013

But it’s just a forgotten old cabin, No feelings, no hopes no remorse. Beautiful!

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Smoky Hoss 16 October 2013

Ah yes, I love it, for the setting, the essence and the memories. Beautiful poem Adeline.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 September 2016

Only a few Miles away! Thanks for sharing.

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Kanav Justa 15 December 2013

this is beautiful adeline, , ,

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Paul Brookes 20 November 2013

A beautiful and evocative poem BB : O)

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Roseann Shawiak 21 October 2013

Adeline maybe the cabin has no memories, but you gave it a place in your poetical memory. Beautiful write, love it. The cabin has given you feelings, hopes and no remorse as you look back upon it each time you read these words. You put your heart into the telling of it's story. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Noreen Carden 20 October 2013

Wonderful poem Adeline loved it.You paint a lovely picture with your words

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Adeline Foster

Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
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