Fragile Poem by Bharati Nayak

Brilliant poem with brilliant expression. I appreciate the poem and its theme. Thanks for sharing.10

A very powerful write. Captures the heavy-ness of the heart in so little words. The melancholy feel flows ontoand envelopes the reader too.

it is very heart touching poem, you are so bland and sensitive poet, wish no one break your lovely heart at all,10++

Pity the soul, pity the spirit The life essence.

Silence, when unwanted, a vacuum one can't bear. Very nice and intense poem, equal opposite to the noise of Silence.

When there is indifference from those whom we love, our heart gets torn apart! We fall into a state of sorrow and depression! The intensity of your feelings of dejection can be felt by the reader in each line! Powerfully expressed! A 10

Full of emotions, feelingly expressed, and yet brilliantly penned.