Francie! Francie! Poem by Siddartha Montik

Francie! Francie!

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Catch me at the End of the World,
Hold me when I fall from heights,
You reached my hand and held it tight,

Tell me 'there is GOD, and you believe too',
We share his goodness in our days
Utter his words through your silence and or even taboo!

Nothing is beyond his creation, Everything as is
We can never cross his design for certain!
He 'is' perfection and humbles us with modesty

Yet we go on to make our own rules
Often Misunderstanding of his intentions
And yet he forgives us though we are fools

His Kindness and patience will all makes that sense
that some day we all will get to know him
But God lets us only have our look at him
thru all his creation in Nature or the Universe!

(Francie your words and mine entangled
like roots of two side by side trees yet so far)

Thursday, December 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: creation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sister Frances 08 December 2016

It's beautiful my friend, like all your poetry. You have lifted my spirits :)

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Pauline Ouko 08 December 2016

I love the way you Glorify the power of the Creator! Even though we are fools, He forgives us! ! He even catch us when we are falling! ! Well written dear.

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Naila Rais 09 April 2018

Well penned....stay blessed... Naila

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Roxanne Dubarry 05 May 2017

God created both the heavens and the earth. He created man in his own image, and after his own likeness! All of us have gone astray, yet we trust in God to turn our lives around!

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Bharati Nayak 20 December 2016

Nothing is beyond his creation, Everything as is We can never cross his design for certain! He 'is' perfection and humbles us with modesty - - - - - - - - - - - - A beautiful poem Sidharth Montik.Thank for sharing.

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Fred De La Foret 09 December 2016

We all cry out to a devine creator, especially when life becomes difficult and confusing. My hope is that there is more to this life than failure, taxes, tears and death. If the eyes are the windows of the soul, then poetry is a crying voice of the soul searching for truth. Faith is firm belief in something for which there is no proof, but complete trust and strong conviction in a personal relationship with God makes our lifes more bearable and satisfying. Good poem, filled with heart-felt sincerity and a hunger for righteousness. I like this poem and will add this poem to MyPoemList. May your muse bless you with wonder verse and inspiration! - Fred de la Foret.

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Anzelyne Shideshe 09 December 2016

God is beyond creation Amen for this poem

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