Give Me Your Steal! Poem by Siddartha Montik

Give Me Your Steal!

Rating: 5.0


I am as Harvest of a 'Research Land', am I?

was always, time and again upheld for that's why?

My kith and Kin.. if you are not Sick and Sin,

This is modern world GOD I am born in this time why?

I am already burnt enough, yet the rules look so fake they crack,

What can be in this Search as much to fetch them as they seek?

I wished those deserts so God for I can be with that,

Even if I am as so burnt and in ever ever so Hot!

Give me not any fresh breath God, for it was all so stole,

Just give me a Second that me, and them so they can find my Soul!

for it is not any filial thing for one to rekindle as real!

Tuesday, December 27, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: eternity,sick,sin,soul
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It is a Poem about my Pent up agony! , , it is still fresh as I lost so much in all! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 20 July 2018

It is a brilliant poem having nice theme based on philosophy. Thanks for sharing.10

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Kee Thampi 13 February 2017

Even if I am as so burnt and in ever ever nice to read

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Linet Sabastian 06 January 2017

''Just give me a Second that me, and them so they can find my Soul! for it is not any filial thing for one to rekindle as real! '' You thought well and wrote well. Well expressed.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 02 January 2017

Hello Siddartha, Wishing you a wonderful year ahead with great poems. A soul searching poem very well articulated. You deserve a full vote and i am most happy to vote for it.

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