Sameer Ahmed

Rookie (08/17/1986 / Pakistan)

From The Socket Of An Eye - Poem by Sameer Ahmed

A magic ball
Concealed in the orbit
Though appears small
Spreads its sight
To the worldly hall.
Sign of beauty
And attraction
If you are shopaholic
Helps in selection
But can cause blurring
With retinal traction.
Observer of the nature
And so confined
Collector of memories
Saves them behind
A master photographer
Of its own kind
A visual art director
Genius and inclined
Telecasts various shows
From studios of mind
Draws a rainbow of colors
All vividly bind
If three are missing
It is colorblind.




(6/3/2009)


Comments about From The Socket Of An Eye by Sameer Ahmed

  • Lola Sanchez (8/18/2009 6:29:00 AM)

    beautifully descriptive! (Report)Reply

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  • Marla Smith (7/11/2009 1:38:00 PM)

    Lots of color, and life mixed in it is good reading. (Report)Reply

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  • Ravi SathasivamRavi Sathasivam (6/21/2009 6:07:00 AM)

    This is also a wonderful imaginative poem from you.
    A light thru your eyes. Well penned
    Thanks for sharing with me
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  • Shashendra Amalshan (6/17/2009 5:33:00 PM)

    great read indeed! ! ! ....hey I should say you are a great master photographer....you can capture many hearts by your hand woven poetry quilts! ! ! ! enjoyed this one....
    10++

    with love shan
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  • Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate (6/16/2009 4:48:00 PM)

    a very beautiful poem enjoyed the reading..10++++


    A master photographer
    Of its own kind
    A visual art director
    Genius and inclined
    Telecasts various shows
    From studios of mind
    Draws a rainbow of colors
    All vividly bind
    If three are missing
    It is colorblind.
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  • Emily Core (6/14/2009 12:26:00 AM)

    well that was a mouth full not bad.......10 (Report)Reply

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  • Pandian Angelina (6/13/2009 5:58:00 AM)

    So, you are reading your lessons well. Jus' kidding, Sameer, a good combination of science and nature. God made Man in His own image, no wonder, each and every part of our's is so wonderful.
    Angel.
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  • Amy Douglass (Fifita) (6/13/2009 12:39:00 AM)

    not my favorite but it's smart and well expressed. (Report)Reply

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  • Jerry Abrahamson (6/12/2009 9:27:00 PM)

    nice poem. Keep going. (Report)Reply

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  • Stephen Clark (6/12/2009 9:09:00 AM)

    Nice imagery and insightful (no pun intended) poem (Report)Reply

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  • Francesca Martin (6/12/2009 12:42:00 AM)

    the eye in the socket of our heads and the eye in the socket of the constellations that watches us all. great write! (Report)Reply

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  • djean Whitney (6/12/2009 12:11:00 AM)

    I like it, this is great, good write10+++ (Report)Reply

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  • Jasbir ChatterjeeJasbir Chatterjee (6/11/2009 11:50:00 PM)

    Eyes often say what the rest of the body denies... (Report)Reply

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  • Ramona ThompsonRamona Thompson (6/11/2009 3:49:00 PM)

    They say the eyes are the true windows to the soul and in this piece you have shown yours in a most wonderous and lovely way.

    Loved it.

    All the best,

    Ramona T
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  • Ronell Warren AlmanRonell Warren Alman (6/11/2009 3:05:00 PM)

    Another great write. YOU KNOW WHAT THEY SAY 'THE EYES HAVE IT'! (Report)Reply

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  • Ivor Hogg (6/11/2009 2:36:00 PM)

    Although I much prefer metered poetry you caught and held my interest. It is a poets rask to see what ithers do not see and interpret (Report)Reply

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  • Noel Horlanda (6/11/2009 2:12:00 AM)

    It's a perfect description of a 20/20 vision and that is the EYE. The eye is the window of your soul so they say. Whatever is sighted, it is recorded directly to your mind only to be recalled when needed. Over all verdict - nicely written, simple words easy to digest and therefore another excellent work.Thanks (Report)Reply

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  • Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (6/10/2009 9:50:00 PM)

    I agree with Audrey Heller and loved the twist too! Your images, as usual, are stunning and the magic ball turned into magic poetry for me! 10 Karin Anderson (Report)Reply

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  • Audrey Heller (6/10/2009 4:28:00 PM)

    I read your poem, which has a new twist!
    For everything, is in the eyes of the beholder
    and what is seen, in their midst! Some will see
    everything, bright and gay. While others will, see
    it, dull and gray! ...10
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  • Meghan Pearson (6/10/2009 2:18:00 PM)

    oh goodness that was amazing..... Bravo (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 3, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, June 22, 2009


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