George's Shoes Poem by Lee Crowell

George's Shoes

Rating: 4.1


my father in law is at the end of his life
his name is George and I don't want him to go

but we all leave
we just don't have to think about it right now
unless we're already in George's shoes

and it's sort of bittersweet
that there's not a living soul who wants him to go
he is loved that much


(George Derby, born April 24 1920, died May 9 2009, I will not forget him)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 03 May 2009

You have captured well the philosophy behind life and death in this small yet powerful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Martine Kolber 02 May 2009

beautifully expressed! Take care, Martine

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Dr.subhendu Kar 02 May 2009

that there's not a living soul who wants him to go...........simply wonderful, well penned

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Shan Demmings 02 May 2009

WOW! ! i REALLY LiKE THiS POEM. i UNDERSTAND iT FULLY! ! i LiKE iT BECAUSE iT HAS iRONY!

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aww i really like this pem my favorite part is when you said not a living soul wants him to go that was just bueatiful

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Fading Heart 03 June 2009

you must feeel so strong about this person if you would write apoem that good about them. I thank you for sharing withme i know i will never forget this poem i hope others see that two

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Winnie Angel 21 May 2009

a loveable feel...sweet and genuine too...beautiful tribute to HIm..May His soul restin peace....

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Victor Sklyarov 08 May 2009

Dear Lee, I Mark 10 for your poem, but not for the message. I, a Russian, will never regard sodomites as a norm but only as pertverts despite any conventions concluded by any perverts. Here I accept responsibility with George Bush collaterally.

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Bob Gibson 07 May 2009

There is a time when we must go live like a river in full flow from moutain stream to river mouth our lives are as simple as north to south!

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Kim Wagener 03 May 2009

sweet and precise. great work.

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