Bri Edwards

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Girlfriend From Hungary....[ Inspired By A Message From Crayon Poet; Humorous? ; Very Short; Food ] - Poem by Bri Edwards

I once had a gal from Hungary,
but she always made me hungry.
So I ate all of her, ...including ALL of her fat,
and then, in my dining room, alone [AGAIN] I sat!

(August 15,2018)

Topic(s) of this poem: food, humorous, love


Poet's Notes about The Poem

if you like this poem, there MUST be something "WRONG" with YOU! ! !

bri;)

Comments about Girlfriend From Hungary....[ Inspired By A Message From Crayon Poet; Humorous? ; Very Short; Food ] by Bri Edwards

  • (9/3/2018 3:03:00 PM)

    Horror and comedy....so well blended, Bri. The last line does make clear why you ruled out Hungary Girlfriend as a title option. (Report)Reply

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  • Nika Mcguin (8/29/2018 9:56:00 AM)

    This is kind of scary lol but funny as well. I wonder if girls from Hungary have an irrational fear of encountering cannibals? I couldn't blame them after this poem lol. Unfortunately this reminds me of an eerie documentary I watched about a Japanese cannibal who ate a girl he had a crush on - literally. (Report)Reply

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  • Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (8/28/2018 10:08:00 PM)

    My goodness! What a poem! You dated a girl from Hungary? Then became hungry?
    Ate all of her and then, sat all alone in the dinning room! ! ! ! Ha ha ha ha ha
    Bri, you are a limit.....
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/24/2018 11:04:00 AM)

    I appreciate the comment of poetess Valsa George. This is a beautiful poem on humor and love having nice inscriptions.10 (Report)Reply

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  • Paul Brookes (8/23/2018 3:52:00 PM)

    clever and banquet of sorts all for sake of an A as usual a cryptic review (Report)Reply

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  • Valsa George (8/23/2018 12:21:00 AM)

    I think something has gone wrong with me! I like this poem as I know you're always hungry! (Report)Reply

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  • Kelly Kurt (8/15/2018 9:06:00 PM)

    I am so in the head that I liked this.: -)
    I like Mexican. Indian, ...... Mmmm
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 15, 2018



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