The stream glides down gurgling
Listen to its sweet refrain
Put down smothering blues brewing
Cast away all throttling pain
Look at life and keep smiling
Grab the little joys the mind can contain
Dismiss all defeatist thoughts surfacing
Wait for the fresh day about to begin
What a beautiful poem. Each and every line truly uplifts the soul. Words that could propel us to look at life and keep smiling. Beautifully crafted and well executed write. Five Stars! ! To my Poem List.
Sun is smiling to serve for universe as per natural laws in selfless mood. We are also smiling seeing this tender sun as reflected in this cover photo. Stream of rays interestingly glide down to touch heart and soul. An excellent poem is well penned..5 stars..
Some people can enjoy nature and be light hearted....some people can easily put away all worries and struggles aside and can look forward to a brighter tomorrow....but exceptionally some get drowned in sombre moods not knowing to get out of it...you have very well helped such people by this poem of yours....well composed and greatly admirable Valsa....full mark
Let the sun rise from the opposite side of life ocean Let the sun light come and shine the life graciously Let the sunny ray of dawn hug the inside heart of love where you live lonely Let the sunlight be friend when no one wants to be give accompany Let the life of loneliness be spiritual when sun always offers new day to live be grateful be grateful to the sunlight of the hopeful everyday
Sunlight's glaNce is symbol of devotion. I love thisbeauty andfeel it looks like Lord's dress. Much devotion grows. This poem is lovely one1 Hail To our LORD!
Look at life and keep smiling Grab the little joys the mind can contain Dismiss all defeatist thoughts surfacing Wait for the fresh day about to begin I loved this verse immensely for the sheer positive vibration it creates like the bright rays of dawn........Thank you Valsa.......5 Stars
Bright side of life is well executed through sunrise. Here I cite...Look at life and keep smiling / Grab the little joys the mind can contain / Dismiss all defeatist thoughts surfacing / Wait for the fresh day about to begin. A nice dedication with attractive graphic. Five stars.
Cast away all throttling pain Wait for the fresh day about to begin......top star
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow so well thought, to grab little happiness like kids running behind the butterflies...Relieve self from small worries like chimney leaving the smoke. A profound and inspiring poem.10****