Gloomy Verse Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Gloomy Verse

Rating: 3.7


1.0 Alone

Alone and alone – you are alone
We are with you – you are alone
Sun and moon – like you alone
O my beloved – poet you alone

2.0 One-way Love

Scarlet dream walks like an ant
Someone can feel others blind
Someone is special others hide
One-way love always confined

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Antonio Liao 03 June 2009

yah! many things can't be seen but fell it in our heart...you unlock the wisdom of harmony and the courage to see...beyond the eye..wonder in the poem that touch the unseen of the heart...as the soul tremendously salute....your existence... makes us believed that you are one of its kind...a poet of today thank you....

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Smiley Hooker 03 June 2009

very sentimental poem. but you'll never be alone with your kind poetry. like the sun and the moon, readers' heart will delightedly shine on you by the touch of your poetry. keep my smile: -)

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Obed Souza 02 June 2009

The heart of the lonely is full of missing people! 10!

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Allemagne Roßmann 02 June 2009

Yes it is true...scarlet dream alwqays walks like an ant...very good allegories used....10+++

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Alison Cassidy 30 May 2009

Thoughtful somber verse with a charcoal truth. Reminds me of Eeyore. 'And how are you today, Eeyore? ' said Pooh brightly. 'Not very how'. said Eeyore gloomily. 'I haven't felt at all how now for a long time.' Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Darren Jkoeryo 22 January 2019

Lovely poem on loneliness.

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Aijaz Asif 04 June 2009

Alone and alone – you are alone We are with you – you are alone Sun and moon – like you alone O my beloved – poet you alone..... this one I can relate to myself or it is, I think so, : p....another beautiful and powerful write, in few lines the whole purpose of loneliness is defined and u did it very masterfully, in my thinking 'alone and alone' and 'One-way love' both are the same coz in both conditions you feel alone....thanks many 10'sssssssssssssssssss rgds asif

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Surya . 03 June 2009

sharp and crisp in conveying an idead, .beautifull. posted 10 love surya

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Brishti Mazumdar 03 June 2009

One-way love always confined How can you tell so many things in so few words? I have to learn it from you.Luv - Brishti

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Lady Grace 03 June 2009

aaalways to be alone is a sacrifice..grace

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