Go On Painting Poem by Aftab Alam

Go On Painting

Rating: 4.7


How fast thou move with the sound, ye brook, I find;
No boat, no dive, yet, you are so beautiful, I drank,
Thy sight, a throat full opiate; I went to swoon,
A nature's painting! Lovely Curios; I will be back soon,

In the lap of high mountains and with curly dense proud wood,
With its fragrance; nose, ears, eyes and mind swooshed,
With the heavenly chorus in the silence of their commotion,
Sun slowly slid down; rolled, in the mountain slop with hood.

A little far there's the Himalaya with shroud; stood, the snow,
Melts into the life that leaps shallowly unto plain, I know,
Pure and chaste, grief, worries, agony all they wash and
Moves towards plain being serious and deep, hand to hand.

With the nature's color, willing to be painted and shine,
Life; yet to know! recklessly and delicately, Is it really mine?

Thursday, May 2, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
on 27th April 2013 Aghaz my youngest son and three other mate went to the country side of Dehradun(Now I am residing here for time being) Up to the mountain and from there down to the brook enjoyed and drank the beauty, 'Tis about that
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 05 May 2013

A picturesque scene from the heights down to the plains! ! A Lovely panorama of Nature at the time of a beautiful sunset! Enjoyed! !

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Valerie Dohren 05 May 2013

There Is always so much beauty to be found and written about in nature. Nice write Atfab.

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David Wood 02 May 2013

As poets we have to paint pictures with words and you have done so brilliantly with this poem.

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Sallam Yassin 04 May 2013

this about the unity and harmony with the mother nature so beautiful with purity of heart thanks to share Aftab

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Buxton Shippy 04 May 2013

Thanks for taking me on a memorable journey. I give you a perfect ten.

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Shafeeqrahman Rahman 08 February 2015

nice to read each and every lines......really touching

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Heather Wilkins 02 December 2014

a beautiful painting of nature

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Elena Sandu 09 May 2013

Thank you! Filled with the nature's beauty, so much that came to be part of your painting. Please wave a hi to the cloud over that peak, it's part of me...

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Shahzia Batool 05 May 2013

Go on painting...! ! ! You kept on painting a fine picture with the perfect lexical choice, right word at the right place made this painting...even the sounds and movements of the brook are felt...one can visualize the scene by the strong word-images! ! !

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Ruby Mostazir 05 May 2013

i like your painting of nature..... : -)

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