Goal Poem by Darren jkoeryo


Rating: 5.0

Hit your ball as hard as you can
the poles are firm in its place
only a guard is moving around
to safe guard the place
you can hit a goal
just strive

Thursday, November 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: goal
Liza Sudina 12 November 2015

just strive hard. for some hard, for some easy!

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Shakil Ahmed 12 November 2015

without trying hard we cannot achieve any thing and i think it is a message for all, well-written poem

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Gajanan Mishra 12 November 2015

hitting the goal, good one, thanks, ,

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Souren Mondal 12 November 2015

Yes, only hard work pays off. There is no alternative to that... Thanks for sharing..

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M Asim Nehal 15 November 2015

Short and strong..............10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 July 2020

A wonderful blank verse! Thanks for sharing.....................................10/10

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 October 2018

setting a goal in life and hitting it hard to achieve.......... a poem of determination.. thank u dear poet. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 July 2016

To safe guard the place! ! With the muse of love. Thanks for sharing.

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Anzelyne Shideshe 06 December 2015

Brief and motivational, .....That no matter the obstacle you got to achieve your objective.Thus the saying where there is a gap(will) there is away.

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Chinedu Dike 29 November 2015

Good depiction of what it takes to achieve one's goal - determination, perseverance... Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Darren. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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