Darren jkoeryo


Goal - Poem by Darren jkoeryo

Hit your ball as hard as you can
the poles are firm in its place
only a guard is moving around
to safe guard the place
you can hit a goal
just strive
hard.

Topic(s) of this poem: goal

Form: Blank Verse


Comments about Goal by Darren jkoeryo

  • Edward Kofi Louis (7/30/2016 4:54:00 PM)


    To safe guard the place! ! With the muse of love. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Anzelyne Shideshe (12/6/2015 9:28:00 AM)


    Brief and motivational, .....That no matter the obstacle you got to achieve your objective.Thus the saying where there is a gap(will) there is away. (Report) Reply

  • Chinedu Dike (11/29/2015 2:23:00 PM)


    Good depiction of what it takes to achieve one's goal - determination, perseverance... Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Darren. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/24/2015 2:13:00 PM)


    Hitting ball with proper ambition to achieve goal is definitely interesting. Hard work is key of success. Interesting message transferred....10 (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/15/2015 11:49:00 AM)


    Short and strong..............10 (Report) Reply

  • Souren Mondal (11/12/2015 7:32:00 AM)


    Yes, only hard work pays off. There is no alternative to that... Thanks for sharing.. (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (11/12/2015 6:54:00 AM)


    hitting the goal, good one, thanks, , (Report) Reply

  • Shakil Ahmed (11/12/2015 6:32:00 AM)


    without trying hard we cannot achieve any thing and i think it is a message for all, well-written poem (Report) Reply

  • Liza Sudina (11/12/2015 6:03:00 AM)


    just strive
    hard.
    for some hard, for some easy!
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 12, 2015



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