God has a body and light
The universe is inside God's light
And it is actually made of a little bit of saliva of God
God's body cannot break into two pieces
Because of gravitational force
If God's body had double mass than it has now
Then also God could not break Itself into two pieces
Even God can not make enough food for himself
That's why God is a little hungry and thirsty
And upset
An interesting view... Not a view I personally hold but interesting none the less... A very well written observation...
Lines deep in meaning. Well linguistic use. Sounding so abstract but well constructed in meaning. In fact you went metaphysical to prove the omnipotence of God. Good work.
nice.. If God's body had double mass than it has now It could break Itself into two pieces Thus He would have His wife and food
Scientific poeting hereby...i like the whiff inside it
He can't have a wife nor food, therefore He cant break into two pieces. Nice words.
well-written, your use of imagery is vivid as well enthralling.. nice poem..
Well written. I love it! It makes me rethink everything in the universe. Everything I know.
Great! fantastic idea.Our universe is made up of a little bit saliva of God, right? Cheers......., Well done! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Full of truth and meaningful. a charm rhymes. you ave wrote this poem with the light. well, well... Regards.