Eyan Desir

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Golden Recognition To Mother - Poem by Eyan Desir

In every great book comes amazing chapters
When pages are turned the story will end
The coldest day of my existence
Was knowing her soul sits on the other side
The woman made of iron is gone
My greatest inspiration sit on God's shores

She was a queen and a goddess
That walked and danced with mortal men
That is how she will be remembered
Her voice stood out in the dark
She brushed obstacles in my path
She gave light when there was none.

Who taught me what's right and wrong?
Who cleared the darkness in my skies
Mother! she was the one that taught
To live life without love means
Living life in vain, to shared love
Means one must suffer its pain.
Where there's life there is hope
Where there's hope man must keep on living.

Mother! you said never give in
When life spits monstrosity in my face
It's an ounce of pain that opens the mind's gate
Thank you mother for being the instrument
That molded me into the man I am.
The greatest book ever shared...

Was the life and times of my mother.


Comments about Golden Recognition To Mother by Eyan Desir

  • (4/21/2010 1:37:00 AM)


    Very beautiful and a special poem. This line captured my eyes 'It's an ounce of pain that opens the mind's gate'. (Report) Reply

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  • Romeo Della Valle (4/19/2010 8:32:00 PM)


    Eyan, you don't know how broken hearted I am right now when I finished reading your poem dedicated to your mother when I just went to see her grave yesterday. tears are rolling on my face right now, it is really touching! It reminds me when I was writing my poem dedicated to my mom titled: 'HOLY WOMAN', it brought back memories to me...Well deserved poem to the One and Only,10+++Love and Peace, we must continue the legacy....Romeo (Report) Reply

  • (4/19/2010 6:33:00 AM)


    an excellent poem. a nice tribute to someone who really deserves every word of it.
    great.
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  • (4/17/2010 8:54:00 PM)


    in every great book comes amazing chapters
    When pages are turned the story will end
    The coldest day of my existence
    Was knowing her soul sits on the other side
    The woman made of iron is gone
    My greatest inspiration sit on God's shores

    i like this stanza!
    it reminds me of something!

    all in all, i like it so much!
    (Report) Reply

  • (4/15/2010 4:08:00 AM)


    devotion to mothers cannot be denied... (Report) Reply

  • (4/14/2010 3:58:00 PM)


    An excellent poem, Eyan, dedicated to your mother, lovely to read............
    10/10/10
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  • (4/14/2010 10:56:00 AM)


    this is indeed a touching poem. she must love it... (Report) Reply

  • (4/13/2010 9:44:00 PM)


    ur mother will be very proud for this as well as all mothers too...a very nice piece dedicated to all mothers especially to ur mother....can i write some wrds to ur mother? ....

    mother, , , you are so good
    the nicest teacher in the world
    the model and the doctor
    the healer, .the adviser...

    mother, i hope i could be as you
    with your hands on my shoulder
    whenever i need you

    to ian...hope you will be as good as ur mother
    appreciate all her words
    for there's no other mother anymore...

    this is touching...lavs ya both...smileeeeeeeeeee
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 13, 2010

Poem Edited: Monday, May 9, 2011


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