Growing Young Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Growing Young

Rating: 5.0


I am growing young...
...with the each day I pass
My tears stopped rolling...
...while pain kept growing
Laughter went loud...
...when the lips were tight
Darkness filled in room...
...whenever door got knocked
Path is always straight...
...on turning ups & downs road
Night remained short...
...when heart moaned on past
Future looked bright...
...with no plans of tomorrow
Heart cried for help...
...when its filled with joy
Left legs danced...
...while the beat got off
Eyes and lips smiled...
...with unspoken tale in heart
I am growing young...
...with the each day I pass

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 06 November 2009

growing young at heart......well composed piece different presentation now and u have amazed me....Thanks!

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Surya . 07 November 2009

very encouraging poem on a positive note.thankfuly severe rhyming is avoided.voted10 surya

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Janell Cressman 07 November 2009

sorry might just be the hour, but i don't really get this poem, would you care to exsplian, i will read it again tomorrow

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Eyan Desir 07 November 2009

Hahahaha me I ma growing young still 16years olds I still feel like a baby haha Well written my friend

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Marieta Maglas 09 November 2009

nice metaphorical poem, nice portrait.10+++++++

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Anju Addanki 08 November 2009

Ya thats truel always want to feel young good one.

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rago rago 07 November 2009

very fine and beautiful write....growing young and how fantastic to be growing yung...

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Rajaram Ramachandran 07 November 2009

One can feel mentally young always despite his growing age. This is nicely said in this poem.

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Joseph Poewhit 07 November 2009

It's all in the heart.

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