(h) 3 (Dedication) Seeds Taking Fruit Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(h) 3 (Dedication) Seeds Taking Fruit

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Five years since you left us behind
Silent tears roll by as we remember
Reliving the anguish that you went through
Helpless we stood watching you valiantly suffer
Your soul finally getting the release
From all the pain and the miseries
Taking flight to an eternal world

I am sure you are watching over us
With your hands spread wide to bless your tree
You are still throbbing in us
Seeds of strength, principles and passion planted in the three
That have taken fruit
Being passed to your grandchildren
And my daughter that you could never see


****** Written for my beloved mom*****

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernestine Northover 05 September 2006

Just beautiful TO, a very moving tribute and so well written. love Ernestine XXX

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Nimal Dunuhinga 05 September 2006

A fruitful tribute to the most adorable person in the world! Her name is Mother.

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Steve Hagget 05 September 2006

This is a beautiful eulogy - from the heart and moving to read as well as, as always from you, being beautifully penned, Steve

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Tailor Bell 05 September 2006

very moving indeed...still providing for you in a way it seems. beautiful work. -Tailor

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Geoff Warden 05 September 2006

A very moving tribute......Well written...

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Melvina Germain 07 November 2006

Tranquil, this is a wonderful elogy, a great tribute to a mother you loved so much. Thankyou for sharing your heartfelt thoughts.---Melvina---

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 06 September 2006

My own mother passed, March 5th 2000! I identify with your sentiments. Magnificent tribute. L

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Catastrophe King 06 September 2006

I stand in respect to the thoughts, to pay respect to the Mother who had given birth to such a pure soul......such an amazing talent!

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Preeti - is here! 05 September 2006

THis is such a splendid tribute, its so touchy, best ever from you! Preets PS - How old is your daughter, just curious, cause kids especially girls are so cute!

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Nalini Hebbar 05 September 2006

beautiful tribute TO...very touching...love...nalini

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