Haiku - 48 Nature Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - 48 Nature

Rating: 5.0


the night has fallen
smoking up the summer air
a jellyfish swims

Haiku - 48  Nature
Monday, May 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 16 May 2016

The beauty of Nature pictured so well through this haiku.

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Loke Kok Yee 16 May 2016

nature's wonders made more amazing in your haiku yhanks Asim-10

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Sriranji Aratisankar 16 May 2016

Very interesting. U have drawn a pen-picture using very few words. Thank you.

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Darren Jkoeryo 27 July 2016

I love to have it but night is scary too, Man.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 May 2016

Night falls on sea near jelly fish. Swimming gives wonderful humor. Very fantastic haiku shared on really.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 May 2016

And to respect nature. Thanks for sharing.

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T Rajan Evol 16 May 2016

Wonderful haiku from master of haiku, Asim 10 on 10

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Kelly Kurt 16 May 2016

You are getting very good at these. It is an addictive form

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