poet Valsa George

Valsa George

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Haiku. Autumn Sky (5-7-5)

See the autumn sky
With big heaps of fluffy wool
To make winter rugs

Topic(s) of this poem: haiku

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 24, 2014
Poem Edited: Thursday, September 17, 2015

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (4/4/2019 5:35:00 AM)

    Wonderful imagery and imaginary. A beautiful haiku on Autumn has been portrayed astutely.

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  • Dimitrios GalanisDimitrios Galanis (2/11/2016 6:16:00 AM)

    In terms of my youth's activities and scenes.To love.

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  • Agatha ElizaAgatha Eliza (10/17/2015 3:57:00 PM)

    It makes me think of warmth and colours...Nicely written!

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  • Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga (1/2/2015 10:33:00 AM)

    How a tiny Haiku can paint a characteristic picture of a season like autumn / winters, is evident here in this poem. Thanks.

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  • Geetha JayakumarGeetha Jayakumar (10/9/2014 3:14:00 PM)

    Beautiful haiku. Autumn is preparing us for winter. Beautifully presented. Loved it.

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  • Mark HeathcoteMark Heathcote (10/3/2014 7:28:00 PM)

    Lovely image you’ve painted it made me smile.

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  • Savita TyagiSavita Tyagi (10/1/2014 9:08:00 PM)

    Love it. Autumn is having a lovely start here.

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  • Daniel BrickDaniel Brick (9/28/2014 3:54:00 PM)

    This is a poem about movement in nature - that is, from one season to another, and the poem is wise because it knows we cannot stop this movement - but we can prepare for what's to come, thus, the blanket-making. Living in Minnesota, where the four seasons are in such stark contrast, I have often made the distinction between AUTUMN AS LATE SUMMER and AUTUMN AS EARLY WINTER. Your poem focuses on the second. I hope our autumn in 2014 stays as long as possible - autumn as late summer!

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  • Md AsadullahMd Asadullah (9/28/2014 5:42:00 AM)

    Small, nice and true, thick wooly clouds of autumn reminds us of thick wooly blankets of coming winter :)

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  • Tirupathi ChandrupatlaTirupathi Chandrupatla (9/26/2014 10:19:00 PM)

    Beautiful clouds fluffy and delightful. Nice haiku. Thank you.

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  • Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (9/25/2014 12:56:00 PM)

    Wonderful haiku indeed....Valsa....a great imagery with lots of insights crafted brilliantly.......

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  • Soulful HeartSoulful Heart (9/25/2014 9:20:00 AM)

    ooooh! i really want to wrap the woollen rug and cradle in the arms of autumn wind that may take me in a swish to some magical land like the flying carpet of alladin......so dreamy

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  • Pradip Chattopadhyay (9/25/2014 9:09:00 AM)

    this's an excellent haiku Valsa, very pretty.

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  • Dinesan MadathilDinesan Madathil (9/25/2014 7:33:00 AM)

    The autumn sky of an ideal strip of land is perceived here. But I am afraid the winter rugs of the sky may be very faint in many parts of India.

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  • Tribhawan KaulTribhawan Kaul (9/25/2014 12:02:00 AM)

    Lot to imagine here. Great haiku. I too just posted Autumn (Acrostic) .

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  • Heather WilkinsHeather Wilkins (9/24/2014 9:55:00 PM)

    nice image with heaps of fluffy wool set to make winter rugs i like the thought

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