Dark assaults the light
Clouds are sweeping past the sky
I can't see the stars
your experience at night described in a wonderful way.......................this haiku is outstanding...........thanks
a lovely haiku on a dark night we can never see the stars
A great haiku, beautifully crafted with vivid imagery...lovely!
If I face such a dark situation I start looking into the eyes of my friends whom I can see even in the dark and whereat I see at least two shining stars, one shining with love and the other shining with support. A lovely poem......10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very well crafted haiku with insights......Valsa......great imagery