Haiku. First Touch (5-7-5) Poem by Valsa George

Haiku. First Touch (5-7-5)

Rating: 4.5


Chaste unwed maidens
Bowing down so shy and coy
On first macho touch

Haiku. First Touch (5-7-5)
Friday, November 6, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: flowers
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitava Sur 07 November 2015

A befitting picture post expressing the deep sensuous emotion as very rightly told in those few words.

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Kelly Kurt 06 November 2015

Lovely use of metaphor, Valsa

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Loke Kok Yee 07 November 2015

the men also a bit shy thanks Valsa-10

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Rajnish Manga 07 November 2015

This is an artistic portrayal of the emotional state of a damsel's first encounter with her youful sensuousness. Thanks for sharing the poem, Valsa ji.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 November 2015

Bowing down in shyness is very wonderful expression of first touch here. Love is expressed in fantastic way to elaborate inner idea.10

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Akhtar Jawad 20 November 2018

How nature adds beauty and joy to this painful life, everyone knows it but everyone cannot describe it like Valsa. It's only Valsa who is capable of making a thing of beauty even more beautiful than what actually it is, It's a proof that she is born for poetry.

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Dimitrios Galanis 11 February 2016

A scene of youths to respect.

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 10 November 2015

Fusion of words blending to form a dance of chaste love – with just 3 lines. wonderful

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 09 November 2015

That is a beautiful haiku with a wonderfully complementing image. (10)

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M Asim Nehal 08 November 2015

Wow, so nicely written and picture adds flavour to your haiku............10+++

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