Haiku. Fire (5-7-5) Poem by Valsa George

Haiku. Fire (5-7-5)

Rating: 5.0


Fire engines speed past
To put out the fire, but none
To douse the fire in!

Monday, September 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 07 September 2015

A philosophical touch in your haiku........I liked it..........10+

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 07 September 2015

Fire fighter's fire is a fire desired. Poem provokes thoughts. Enjoyed. All he way to 10.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 07 September 2015

Fire fighter's fire is a fire desired. Poem provokes thoughts. Enjoyed. All the way to 10.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 07 September 2015

Fire inside may be positive or negative. It is difficult to determine what to do about it.

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 November 2019

This poem tells us why some of the best poems are short, Their brevity pithily tells us so much that a long poem fails to at times. A Haiku that hikes up your mood.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 July 2018

A wonderful little poem dear madam! I liked it so much! Thanks for sharing...10

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hello 18 September 2018

good job bro

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 09 September 2015

A thoughtful haiku that stokes the fire inside.

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Kelly Kurt 07 September 2015

A wonderful haiku, Valsa! Hopefully nothing can put out the burning fire inside

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Jaishree Nair 07 September 2015

A smouldering volcano inside........superb

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