Haiku. Mountains (5-7-5) Poem by Valsa George

Haiku. Mountains (5-7-5)

Rating: 4.8

Towering cliffs, dark
Carved sculptures frozen in time
To last for ever!

Monday, October 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
Rajnish Manga 27 October 2015

A poem carved in the eternal beauty of those majestic mountains that keep us in awe. Thanks, Valsa ji.

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M Asim Nehal 26 October 2015

Great imagery and nice haiku indeed....10++ Carved sculptures frozen in time... it speaks for itself.

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Loke Kok Yee 27 October 2015

they will last forever like your poems! Thanks Valsa-10

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Muhammad Ali 27 October 2015

What attracts me in this haiku... In the last the sign of exclamation '! ' I think it completes these three lines, but what for feelings!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 27 October 2015

Monumental sculptures frozen in time. Beautiful observation.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 June 2020

Great description of mountains. So vividly portrayed in three brilliant lines. Wonderful haiku.

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Akhtar Jawad 22 November 2018

Man can do anything, carved sculptures by men o n the cliffs is the evidence.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 February 2018

A dazzling little poem! Appreciated the precise expression in just a dozen of words! Thank you so much dear madam for sharing.......10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 October 2017

Brilliant haiku with stunning expression. Concise but meaningful.

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Hazel Durham 08 November 2015

The grandeur of towering cliffs steeped in time everlasting, stunning haiku!

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