Valsa George

Haiku. Mountains (5-7-5) - Poem by Valsa George

Towering cliffs, dark
Carved sculptures frozen in time
To last for ever!

Topic(s) of this poem: haiku

Comments about Haiku. Mountains (5-7-5) by Valsa George

  • Dr Dillip K Swain (2/2/2018 10:21:00 PM)

    A dazzling little poem! Appreciated the precise expression in just a dozen of words! Thank you so much dear madam for sharing.......10 (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/2/2017 1:15:00 PM)

    Brilliant haiku with stunning expression. Concise but meaningful. (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (11/8/2015 7:30:00 AM)

    The grandeur of towering cliffs steeped in time everlasting, stunning haiku! (Report) Reply

  • (10/27/2015 1:03:00 PM)

    What attracts me in this haiku...
    In the last the sign of exclamation '! '
    I think it completes these three lines, but what for feelings!
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  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (10/27/2015 11:52:00 AM)

    Monumental sculptures frozen in time. Beautiful observation. (Report) Reply

  • Roop Rekha Bhaskar (10/27/2015 6:18:00 AM)

    Just like the frozen cliffs i cant write(enough) to describe your talent. Thank you and God bless you. (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (10/27/2015 3:12:00 AM)

    To last for ever!
    This is the most precious line. Great write.
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  • (10/27/2015 1:05:00 AM)

    they will last forever like your poems!
    Thanks Valsa-10
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  • Rajnish Manga (10/27/2015 12:08:00 AM)

    A poem carved in the eternal beauty of those majestic mountains that keep us in awe. Thanks, Valsa ji. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/26/2015 11:57:00 PM)

    Great imagery and nice haiku indeed....10++
    Carved sculptures frozen in time... it speaks for itself.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 26, 2015

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