Haiku. Molestation.(5-7-5) Poem by Valsa George

Haiku. Molestation.(5-7-5)

Rating: 5.0

A bud opens at night
Like the moon on a clear sky
Bees come to molest her

Loke Kok Yee 24 October 2015

you take haiku to a higher level so well described the next time I see a bud I will remember this write of yours Thanks Valsa-10

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Pheko Motaung 23 May 2015

I love your beautiful poems! Thanks for sharing

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Ken E Hall 28 November 2014

Natures beauty in this poem thanks to the working bee...lovely wisdom filled words without bees there would be no us..kind regards

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 22 November 2014

Oh this is fantastic write......Valsa.......imagination at the best.....amazing piece

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Roseann Shawiak 05 February 2016

Very vivid image comes to mind when reading this poem. Seems to have two meanings, one of pure nature and the other of man which is not pure. Great Haiku! 10+++++ Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Anjandev Roy 23 October 2019

Brilliant haiku.Thank u.anjandev roy.

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Prabir Gayen 11 June 2019

A bud opens at night Like the moon on a clear sky Bees come to molest her.. very beautiful

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 June 2018

An amazing Haiku! Appreciated the concept of molestation that you have deeply observed at the illicit deeds of an insect! Your poems are indeed very scholarly! I derive a lot of pleasure reading your poems! (10)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 November 2017

Like moon bud opens and bees come to molest her. Beautiful haiku on nature nicely presented. Thanks.

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Loke Kok Yee 01 July 2016

the only girl in town? ? ? great haiku! ! thanks Valsa-10

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