1. Age sleeps
Under blanket-
Temperature falling.
2. Layer of frost
Settles into
The tunnel of desire
3. A louse walks
Along hair-way
Difficult destination.
insightful, lovely-the beauty of Haiku so much said and unsaid, leaving the reader to think.
Haikus in general are sweet delicacies...you have done well dainty...especially the last funny one
Please add 'to' before Difficult destination. Imagination and metaphar marvelous mark 10
good haiku bunch...fragrant...especially the third one...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
gorgeous! keep writing! could you read my poems too? thank you.