Haiku-Search Poem by Valsa George

Haiku-Search

Rating: 5.0


Sand dunes stretch endless
Eyes search far in hopefulness
An oasis to spot

Sunday, June 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: search
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 25 June 2017

Profound. Indeed that's our life. A succinct gem that deserves a mighty 10.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 June 2017

Wind forms the sediment or ridge of sand. Eyes carry vision and vision searches our ambition so far. This is an oasis to spot. Eyes search life with interesting views. Nice poem is shared with care of mind blowing expression.10

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Akhtar Jawad 21 June 2017

Life is itself a desert and a moment of love is an oasis. Beautiful poem.

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Susan Williams 20 June 2017

The portrayal of the verb Search in imagery - - - - - - - - - and in mirages too? You do brevity that is succinct but also full-bodied. These word-images conjure up the real thing as well as paragraphs upon paragraphs and pages upon pages would have done- - better as a matter of fact. May we all spot an oasis in the deserts of our life. Beautiful write- -worthy of Poem of the Day and a million 10's

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Anjandev Roy 02 December 2019

Fantastic haiku. Thank u, dear poetess.anjandev roy.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 January 2019

Hope-fullness is searched through beauty of vision through eyes. This poem reflects thoughtful attitudes. An interesting state of expression motivates mind. A nice poem is beautifully penned.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 June 2018

A beautiful Haiku dear madam! I derive a great pleasure reading your poems! (10)

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Muhammad Ali 29 July 2017

I try to praise less, most of the time when I read your words, and I feel wordless too. how to express a beauty, that is poetry, and if poem is so natural as a breath, how to comment! eyes are sentenced. masterpiece

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Valsa George 30 July 2017

I am bowled over by your comment..! ! . Thank you so much Muhammed!

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Loke Kok Yee 25 June 2017

Your three lines applies to everything in life, whatever we do; we are always looking for the 'oasis' that will bring us bring us accomplishment. Thank you for this profound Haiku.

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