Sand dunes stretch endless
Eyes search far in hopefulness
An oasis to spot
Wind forms the sediment or ridge of sand. Eyes carry vision and vision searches our ambition so far. This is an oasis to spot. Eyes search life with interesting views. Nice poem is shared with care of mind blowing expression.10
Life is itself a desert and a moment of love is an oasis. Beautiful poem.
The portrayal of the verb Search in imagery - - - - - - - - - and in mirages too? You do brevity that is succinct but also full-bodied. These word-images conjure up the real thing as well as paragraphs upon paragraphs and pages upon pages would have done- - better as a matter of fact. May we all spot an oasis in the deserts of our life. Beautiful write- -worthy of Poem of the Day and a million 10's
Hope-fullness is searched through beauty of vision through eyes. This poem reflects thoughtful attitudes. An interesting state of expression motivates mind. A nice poem is beautifully penned.
A beautiful Haiku dear madam! I derive a great pleasure reading your poems! (10)
I try to praise less, most of the time when I read your words, and I feel wordless too. how to express a beauty, that is poetry, and if poem is so natural as a breath, how to comment! eyes are sentenced. masterpiece
Your three lines applies to everything in life, whatever we do; we are always looking for the 'oasis' that will bring us bring us accomplishment. Thank you for this profound Haiku.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Profound. Indeed that's our life. A succinct gem that deserves a mighty 10.