Sun has tripped over,
Upturned a pail of gold paint
Color permeates!
Sunset well captured in this haiku......Valsa......great imagery
Great imagery presented in this haiku. Can be related to dusk or dawn when sky the painted at its best at the time of setting and rising sun. Happy writing.
Beautiful. Twilight witness for being relinquished from days toil. Sun also witness the same. Thanks for share. Regards.
A beautiful haiku on sunset nicely executed. Poem is brief but its boundary of feeling is vast.
Wow... that's a wonderful haiku painted by a sun....... Loved it.
What a delightful way to show the sudden burst of colors we so love at sunset. To think the lordly sun can be just as clumsy as we humans is reassuring! Even the great ones can have accidents - and what wonders result from some of them!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a beautiful haiku, a painting with words.