Sylvia Frances Chan

Gold Star - 128,585 Points (22 November / Jakarta, Indonesia)

Happy Valentine's Day.... - Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

My Valentine
think about it
this is my most precious poem,

for my valentine date,
a postgraduate,
really a friend to have a date with,
handsome, cute
beautiful, polite,
never offensive,
always defensive,
honest and frank,
not bald,
always diligent,
work hard, to the enigma is solved,
the most difficult problems
also the easiest,
all objects, subjects and themes,
he is working on continously,
he is always tremendously serious about it,
he is never lazy
he leads a simplest life,
richest from within,
never brag,
always help persons who need help,

he is still the same today,
a helping hand for the others,
he believes in God, but he is no longer a child,
he has lost his wildest hair
but he has still much hair, not too old
he is also not bald

my first date, my first love mate
my first beloved,
my very serious spouse and bedmate
till today on this Valentine Date....!

Wishing A HAPPY VALENTINE's DAY For All Poets
On Poem Hunter Worldwide

Sincerest,
Sylvie
14 February 2020

Topic(s) of this poem: happiness, love, love and life, valentine, valentines day

Form: Prose Poem


Poet's Notes about The Poem

My notes:
my poems are oft a thought that provokes, a smallest philosophy,
that has deep beautiful eyes, and common sense,
it will proliferate, in your deepest inner self,
that's my poem today, for my best friend,
My darling, my beloved a lifetime
my very serious spouse, my valentine date

Sylvie
AD.14 Febraury 2020

Comments about Happy Valentine's Day.... by Sylvia Frances Chan

  • Budhashaya Behera (2/19/2020 8:55:00 AM)

    I am wishing you very happy Valentine's day. This poem is composed from your kind heart for your Valentine and this contains God's love. I find this poem very lovable and right to be kept in heart forever. This wonderful poem is warm and heart touching...10++ (Report)Reply

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  • Rose Marie Juan-austinRose Marie Juan-austin (2/18/2020 9:29:00 PM)

    I like the ultimate stanza.So passionate, honest
    and lovingly crafted and conveyed.
    Your husband is so lucky to have you.
    There will never be like you. With your stellar
    attributes , he is indeed fortunate for having a beautiful,
    brilliant and talented wife.
    Belated Happy Valentine's Day, Sylvia and to your
    wonderful husband.
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  • Rose Marie Juan-austinRose Marie Juan-austin (2/18/2020 9:19:00 PM)

    A very lovely, sweet and heartwarming dedication to
    a brilliant, kind, lovable and God fearing husband.
    The great Poetess is so lucky to have such a wonderful spouse.
    I just wish I was able to read this poem on Valentine's Day itself
    and greet you a Happy Valentine's Day.
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  • Heather W.B. (2/18/2020 2:38:00 AM)

    Few comments below a person has given you advice and you have thanked him for his ardent responses included the advices. I think such a person has used my name to give you advice from different machine. Just I have read that response and I have read that person's comment. In that comment the man has said you to be a lovable personality and in the comment given misusing my name the man has written you to always value your personality. (Report)Reply

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  • Heather W.B. (2/18/2020 2:25:00 AM)

    Thank you. You have rightly recognized me since PF days. Reading about Valentine's day poem it means a lot to me and my heart. Very honestly you have praised your Valentine as well as God. You have also urged God's blessings and you have given your maximum effort to make your love first and gentle. We believe in God, we are God's children. I have felt the beauty of Valentine you have shared. (Report)Reply

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  • Heather W.B. (2/16/2020 10:07:00 PM)

    Below comment given in my Name is not given by me and it has not gone from my machine I use. Here I clarify you. I do not review poem giving advice and I do not like such activity. You better know in which way I review if you are little acquainted with me. Any third party has misused my name. This might be work of such a person who likes to advice or command others with ill mentality. I do not have such habit. (Report)Reply

    Sylvia Frances Chan(2/17/2020 3:52:00 AM)

    I am so sorry, dear Heather, I was a bit surprised too having read that response, indeed it does not sound like you. You are an adorable poetess, I know you since PF and also your way of giving comments. Indeed there are some bad persons who use other poets'names. I apologize, dear Heather.

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  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (2/16/2020 5:13:00 AM)

    my first date, my first love mate
    my first beloved,
    my very serious spouse and bedmate
    till today on this Valentine Date....! /// this life is happiest valentine life; this love is happiest valentine love! ! !
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  • Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan (2/16/2020 3:53:00 AM)

    Thank you so much dear Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir! I have much respect for the way you treat your fellow poets. I owe you so many of your poems I have not commented yet and yet you are constantly present to give me accolades and praise. That is in my eyes a man sent by God. Truly. This is sheer honesty. Thank you for the precious 10. What I most appreciate and have respect is that you do never expect responses, while you give (Report)Reply

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  • Anjandev Roy (2/15/2020 8:57:00 PM)

    Excellent representation. Thank u.anjandev roy. (Report)Reply

    Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan(2/16/2020 4:09:00 AM)

    Thank you so much, dear Anjandev. Your visits are mostr appreciated and so are your valuable comments and ardent compliments. Thank YOU.

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  • Heather W. B. (2/15/2020 7:51:00 PM)

    Always value your personality... that is very much important. God' s blessings be upon thee (Report)Reply

    Sylvia Frances Chan(2/16/2020 4:14:00 AM)

    thank you so much Heather dear, for your precious advice,
    love to see you here, especially on this day.Thank you so much for your loveliest words. God's Blessings

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  • Poet PoetPoet Poet (2/15/2020 10:03:00 AM)

    beauty and love
    lies in the beholders
    a loving couple still in mood of VALENTINE
    well done
    may god SHOWER ROSES ON YOU TWO
    POETESS AND MORE MA'AM
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    Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan(2/16/2020 3:24:00 AM)

    The quote LIES IN THE BEHOLDERS does not count for me, HE IS REALLY HANDSOME, my friends all said that. Thank you once again for your valuable words and precious visit.

    Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan(2/16/2020 3:18:00 AM)

    How loveliest is thy respinse, dear Poet Poet! You can guess sheern correctly: I cite the last 4 lines of your response here: a loving couple still in mood of VALENTINE well done
    may god SHOWER ROSES ON YOU TWO
    POETESS AND MORE MA'AM...WOW! Thank you so much, dear Poet Poet! God's Blessings

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (2/15/2020 1:52:00 AM)

    You love God and that is why you too love his creation and by his grace you love all starting from insects to higher creatures. You have your freedom of expression. Please do not give your freedom in other's hand. It may be dangerous. Perhaps the jealous man by hook or crook wants to capture you and regulate you which is injustice and it should not be accepted. As far as we know from God's message we should love all. (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (2/15/2020 1:43:00 AM)

    You are a lovable personality that we know from many years and we too know that you love all creatures including human beings to birds to wild animals. We have never marked that you have praised any creature in unnecessary manner. We know that you praise the creature when you find value. You have praised elephants in Nepal, you have praised lion, you have praised old men and you have praised also bumblebee. We do not think that this quality affects your personality. (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (2/15/2020 1:37:00 AM)

    Hiding his name the jealous man has mentioned that below person is an idiot and it is so sad. He has given this from pop ups without logging-in-into the account by writing a name option. He thinks that no one knows him. You know him well and I know too. There is no need to tell it openly. (Report)Reply

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  • Aniruddha PathakAniruddha Pathak (2/14/2020 11:49:00 PM)

    Brilliantly penned, dear poet, very unlike many Valentine poems,
    yet, sorry dear poet, half way thru the poem I could guess the plot,
    but that does not take away any brilliance of the poem. Full credit.
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    Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan(2/16/2020 3:13:00 AM)

    But this is sheer modern poetry, Aniruddha Sir! Not a Riddle. But I appreciate very much your supportive compliments and your precious full credit and ardent visit.Thank YOU!

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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (2/14/2020 6:53:00 PM)

    I wish you Happy Valentine's Day! Be a lovable personality...love them who deserve love! Unnecessary praise may affect your personality! Stay always happy and blessed! (Report)Reply

    Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan(2/16/2020 3:36:00 AM)

    Thank you for your ardent responses included the advices
    Thank you too for your precious visit and valuable comments.
    Absolutely those who deserve accolades, praise, love and more, are the humblest, honest and polite ones. Too many students need still my full attention to become full employed poetess.
    That's why so much more to criticize. Be Blessed and be happy.

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (2/14/2020 1:40:00 PM)

    This poem deserves full 10 point and I rate full point for this lovely poem that motivates mind. Thank you... (Report)Reply

    Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan(2/16/2020 7:28:00 AM)

    WOW! Again a precious 10! I feel treated so royally because of the precious and important 10" s.
    I am thankful that this poem is called lovely and motivates mind. WOW! Thank YOU, dear Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir. God's Blessings each day is wondrous, greatest and smallest.

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (2/14/2020 1:39:00 PM)

    A beautiful, polite and nice friend of yours who has stayed with you for long time will definitely love this beautiful and outstanding poem. He believes in God and you too believe in God. This poem is a precious poem treasured as per time. Thank you once again for penning this lovely poem. (Report)Reply

    Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan(2/16/2020 4:04:00 AM)

    The friend you mentioned is my spouse, dear Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir. Thank you so very much for your magnificent comments and most valuable compliments concerning God.
    You're mosdt welcome, Sir. God Blesses you daily and your beloved great family.

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (2/14/2020 1:37:00 PM)

    A great card is designed with decorative flowers and roses are reflecting fragrance. This card is suitable cover photo and we like this very much. Tremendously seriousness is brought up and this poem is very nicely penned on occasion of Happy Valentine's Day. The attractive title motivates mind. Thank you very much for sharing this lovely poem...10 (Report)Reply

    Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan(2/16/2020 3:56:00 AM)

    Thank YOU so much for your precious comments, your worthy visits, your valuable feedbacks and your ardent compliments. AND the importnat 10's. God's Blessings in Abundance for you and your beloved great family.

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 14, 2020



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