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He Walks With Breaths

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He wraps time
And space and substance
He creates stones
And souls and plants
He stays in heavens
And hearts and neutrons
He walks with breaths
And thoughts and photons
He shares whispers
And scents and smiles

He spreads on days
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Friday, April 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: almighty
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I read a poem by Susan Williams, 'I Want To Walk With You',and afterwards I gathered these lines.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM

He creates stones And souls and plants He stays in heavens He creates every particle with great care. Beautiful poem.

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Wow this is so eloquent and intellectual way of glorifying God. Kudos for a great poem.

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Unwritten Soul 01 May 2018

What a wonderful summary of loving Him, you did these in such original and amazing way..i do enjoy this cleverly written poem...Yes Thanks to Susan for her beautiful poem that inspired people to do another beautiful poetry. Of course we all know she is a wonderful writer, you too Ali!

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Anjandev Roy 23 December 2019

Brilliant piece. Thank u. anjandev roy.

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Susan Williams 11 December 2019

I found this poem intriguing and a blessing to read! And thank you for mentioning my poem as a bit of a catalyst for this superior piece 10++++++++++

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Susan Williams 11 August 2018

Thank you for the mention in your Poet's Notes, that was a kind thing to do. He wraps time And space and substance He creates stones And souls and plants Exceedingly lovely lines in praise of our Creator.

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Mj Lemon 26 May 2018

The power of the unseen, the unseeable, the subtle, the sublime...A very thought-provoking, amazing work, Ali.

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Valsa George 05 May 2018

Yes, He is omnipresent and is there in every photon and neutron.... and in the entire universe! He cannot be confined to time or space! Great write!

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