Heart Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Heart

Rating: 5.0


Subject is my heart
Music is its beat
Silence is its tongue
Kindness is its skin
Darkness is its life

Green is its only feel
Pink is its life wish
Yellow is its lives goal
Blue is its best pal
Pale is its real truth

Memories are its blood
Dreams are its food
Words are its sleep
Deeds are its wealth
Cracks are its health

Soft are its walls
True are its windows
Pure are its doors
Closed are its rooms
Forbidden is its house

Fighting is its hobby
Smiling is its courage
Solitude is its strength
Patience is its art
Subject is my heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Janell Cressman 25 June 2009

AWESOME! ! ! ! ! ! ! I really like it. it' just kind of roles of the tongue

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Surya . 25 June 2009

fantastic and meaningfull.love this poem surya

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Surya . 25 June 2009

fantastic and meaningfull.love this poem surya

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rago rago 25 June 2009

too fine and nicely written..............

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 June 2009

Happy colorful poem, love it.

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Marieta Maglas 26 June 2009

nice visual metaphors of color: ''Green is its only feel Pink is its life wish Yellow is its lives goal Blue is its best pal Pale is its real truth'' By thinking of my rainbow of happiness I give you...10++++

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Joseph Poewhit 26 June 2009

Nice - I like the 'dreams are its food'.

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Catrina Heart 26 June 2009

Different colours and paces of the heart well depicted..10+++

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Louis Rams 25 June 2009

an excellent write of the heart. a double ten.

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Eyan Desir 25 June 2009

This one is complex for me great flow...very interesting

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