Heart's Musings Poem by Bharati Nayak

Heart's Musings

Rating: 4.7


Words of endearment
Whispered into wind
Wafted in the air
Engraved in the soul
With layers of bright petals
Forming the red rose.

Soul's musings
Heard somewhere
On the journey
Murmured
And echoed in tree's rustlings
Sung by the cuckoos
Hummed by the bees
Showered through
Night moon's beams.

Eyes sparkle
Reflecting joy
Mirroring heart's desire
To merge into the bliss.

Friday, May 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 21 November 2015

Words of endearment Whispered into wind Wafted in the air Engraved in the soul With layers of bright petals Forming the red rose........................fantastic creation of love to form...mind blowing appropriate use of words spatial... 10+, thanks for sharing

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Allotey Abossey 07 August 2015

Eyes sparkle Reflecting joy Mirroring heart's desire To merge into the bliss. Very museful. I love it

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 September 2015

And echoed in tree's rustlings Sung by the cuckoos Hummed by the bees Showered through Night moon's beams. and at the end you wrote emerging into bliss. human love aspiring for a heavenly bliss... si understand it Bharati. Thank you.

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Ravi A 15 May 2015

Nice verses. Soul's musings heard somewhere - true. The entire universe is linked so, a pulse at the end of the universe can reach you in different ways. You can hear the in between voices. Transference and translations will take place. Beautiful.

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Sekharan Pookkat 16 May 2015

Muse and Zeus dances in my musings And Mnemosyne is happy On the journey- great imagination

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Khairul Ahsan 03 September 2020

A wonderful poem that leaves a blissful caress in the readers' minds! 'Soul's musings........ Sung by the cuckoos Hummed by the bees Showered through Night moon's beams' - These lines effortlessly describe the blissful delight!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 April 2018

Dear madam, you have composed this poem from heart with an enchanting beaginning. Sung by the cuckoos, hummed by the bees, showered through night moon's beams are more touching. The concluding stanza is impressive too. Let it be quoted.... Eyes sparkle Reflecting joy Mirroring heart's desire To merge into the bliss. A brilliant poem which attracts me for second visit. Thank s for sharing.10

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Colin Jeffery 20 October 2017

Loved this poem - - the images inspired moved me greatly.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 May 2017

Engraved in the soul! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 31 October 2016

Love is a complex feelings, it has no limits, its like a heart is speaking and the mind don't understand...eyes sparkle, reflecting joy, mirroring hearts desire, to merge into bliss beautiful choice of words.

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