**** Heartthrob Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

**** Heartthrob

Rating: 4.5


The Oak of Lancashire emits color
Of your hair, light as Tulips on Titicaca Lake
Brown as chestnut of Hunstanton
Silken as Tianjin silk
Cozy winds of English Channel perplexed
As it blew the crown of your beauties
Cleopatra would envy summons her army
Of infidel to dethrone you out of devotee
I immensely bailed out of twilight dream
Reality synchronized with ambiguity
Don’t tell me the spreads of Heaven
Constitute your legacy of winning
The heart of a legend
The soul of a soul catcher

Greenish waters of Tioman Island
Reflect the color of your deep sleeper eyes
Mesmerized my instinct to capture the glows
Thrust into my fascination valves
How could I ignore its winter night’s aurora?
Like a rainbow sneaks and amazes
Awaiting heart juxtaposed
Hypnotized and unbearable
Impact were too punitive
Once King’s Lynn embraced
The path of Wisbech
Painting the trails of me
The frequent visitor
Norfolk skies would familiar

Strawberries of Edinburgh resemblance
The lips so voluptuous
When you speak
Strait of Gibraltar turns wild
Leaving seafarers spin out of time tunnel
Building up the crave so inevitable
Locking lips I’d feel so invincible
As cold as North Sea
I touch you
Look at me in the eyes
Like your thick accent you say
“I loaf ya so mooch, bloday mooch”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Lambremont, Sr. 14 October 2008

As well consructed as the beauty it depicts. A bit overloaded with goegrraphic references. The end of the first verse a bit too obscure. Fine write, very entertaining, held my interest throughout.

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Ozzy Govea 13 October 2008

You can imagine everything you wrote, and I believe you can only do that with good poetry, great job!

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I cannot wait until i become as good as u..i love it

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Richard Prosper 10 October 2008

This poem reflects someone who is well traveled and seasoned in writing. If I could describe a woman as lovely as you have, I should think I would showcase my talent also. Great write!

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Hercolena Oliver 10 October 2008

Excitably thought provoking.

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Exasperation 22 December 2019

It's a hundred over 10.

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Rivers' Baby Gurl ;) 02 February 2009

I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS POEM! ! ! ! U R AN AMAZING WRITER! ! ! I AM VERY INSPIRED

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Krisdale Talidong 12 December 2008

I LOVE IT! ! ! ! ! ! You are really a great writer! !

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Triin Kann 22 October 2008

I like the ending :) Such a great poem... as always

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Zandi Mantho Koveya 20 October 2008

A NICE POEM INDEED, YOU ARE A GOOD WRITER, KEEP IT UP AND GOD BLESS..! ! !

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