In her castle, she lived by herself
waiting for her prince to arrive
but he only came once in a while
just to keep the fire alive
she never wanted more
she never had demands
her only wish was for him to be her man
but her castle stayed empty inside
often desperate for his love to arrive
he comes with love in abundance
he comes with passion and romance
but he cannot come with the commitment that would somehow enhance
so her song remains without a tune
a flavor without a meal
steps without a dance
a fantasy that will never be real
but she cannot let go
of the love that he bestows
living without would indeed make her pout
in her empty castle
Copyright @ Aqua Flower
Thank you for your wonderful comment! This is one of my original poems posted a while ago. I reposted as this was a favorite of mine!
I had a prince like that- - He ran hot & cold- - Nearly drove me crazy! He couldn't commit, either. A girl friend told me, 'Don't expect more than he's giving now.' A very relatable poem!
Us princesses have to stick together so we don't go crazy! Good advice from a girlfriend! Thank you for your comment.
I'm glad you didn't go crazy lol...love does that at times. Your girlfriend's advice is a good one! Thank you for your comments!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The fantasy created with a part time lover, very good poem, a 10.
Thank you for your comment on an old poem of mine. It came from the princess. She is still awaiting her prince to arrive and stay!