Your love has limits
truth hidden behind lies
Love without commitment
is a love that won't survive
your feelings for me are not real
or else I wouldn't feel
tricked and deceived
from your love's profanity
my heart dances with illusions
my mind suppresses conclusions
fairy tales don't come true
otherwise I would be with you
copyright @ Aqua Flower
revised 2020
Lion & Tigress series
Hi John, thank you for your comment on this poem. Words are windows that open up our mind to truth.
Emotions run deep in this piece perhaps that's why the words flowed so easily. Thank you for the high rating of 10 +
Hearts understand deceit and dishonesty; though they may not express always. 'Love without committment is a love that won't survive' - true, very true! I felt sad after reading this poem and hoped, the poetess would find ways to cheer herself up!
I really like the line, from you love's profanity, a lie and a swear! Lies can hurt so much.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great poem about mind dances with illusions.