He was bragging about his silence
For a while
She was watching in silence
All the while
Preaching doesn't get featured out
That easily
With the one that practices
Perfectly!
very nice and meaningful poem. i like your economy of words. thanks for sharing.
short yet full of brilliant thoughts silence vs silence...peace silence is deafening but at the same time....its better to keep silent and observe than say something of no importance... or argue with something we fully know... multiple message in this write... 10++++++ Lovelots, Snow
The black holes in space are far easy to fathom out than life giving species of woman.....and all you can say is 'What have I done! ' Clever little piece Sir Kesav +++++10 regards
Silently conquered...love won...ha, ha10...thanks for your comments
Very Clever! ! So much said with minimal words. Brilliant Kesav! All this silence is killing me :) 10 Wendy
‘…Preaching doesn’t get featured out…’ Just like ‘Lip Service’ {LS]… where fluid transfusion required capsules are useless…well the world we live mostly bypass by LS …we make us like colorful enjoyable screensaver and stay like skinsaver… Thanks Sir for such a poem… 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK
I had to read it thrice to understand this poem. Very deep and profound.......I think this will haunt me for some more days
She was watching in silence excellent reflective poem about this kind of silence, thank you for sharing 10++++++++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
silence at times is a creepy one....just slink on you without warning...so beware... good write Kesav.....10