Here We Are Together Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Here We Are Together

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No one finds us here; here we are together,
On a white marble in the bosom of naked night
You brood over my soul worn in blue dress
At the shore of a river beneath a moonlit hillside
Where the moonlight sleeps on the bed of water.
Where the shivering hands of breeze embracing
And caressing our tender breast corsage.
Being scared of certain peeping eyes far away
They are the Godesses of night or the Sweet hearts of Moon,
Their eyes nictitating so coyly looking at the cupid moon
While my lover covered her eyes with her pellucid palm
When I kissed her pinkish nail beds.
Like a soft hair I diffused over her fringes.
I nuzzled my nose all over her nude ridges.
Here we're together, we're together
Who can hear the song of our souls here?
Oh I cannot write anymore here that I'm so sleepy,
Clenching my pen between my right thumb and index-finger.
When I write her name here in a white paper
Over my name, over my name at midnight
Sitting on the shore of a river in a moonlight night.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 21 September 2011

Good poem. Great write.

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Crimson Love 21 September 2011

Beautiful poem, So full of love, and intelligent words, well done! : D

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Stefanie Fontker 21 September 2011

Beautiful imagery. Your poetry is always very detailed. Great writing.

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Jay Bradley 21 September 2011

I like it, as seems to be the way, your imagery, because of and in addition to your word choice, is vivid and striking and rich and complex. I think I like more the juxtaposition of night and death, whenever someone writes 'Moonlight' it hits like 'Moonlight Drive', for obvious reasons as well as complex. Though I am not a huge fan of this sort of love poetry, I couldn't pull my eyes from your work. well done.

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Allemagne Roßmann 21 September 2011

You lies over my body and, We are in black dress, innovative and well penned verses here..well structured and symbiotic lines....a very good metatype of poetry i must say

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Meena Mustafa 02 August 2012

Beautifully written and a very ROMANTIC write :) tyvm

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Harindhar Reddy 31 October 2011

Hello dear these are red hot lines of the romantic poetry which I recent in my life. I mean Romanticism at the best with being even an iota of vulgarity. I like it Yummy poem. I think it is special designed for an exclusive person in your life. Great going my amigo. Loud cheers for your Romantic poem........10+++++++ 'Then my lover covered her eyes with her pellucid palm and, I kissed at her pinkish nail beds. Then the nimbus of my eyeballs diffused over her fringes. I nuzzled my nose all over her soft and nude ridges.'

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Minu Alex 16 October 2011

Really nice! enjoyed it

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Christina Phan 22 September 2011

Very beautiful and great poem. keep it up.

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Hans Vr 22 September 2011

Very well written romantic poem. Images well chosen. Really enjoyable.

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