Hoping Again! ! ! ! Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Those who wheeze go on beyond nineties. Hope to you is assured. Word inversion may be adopted while writing rhyming lines. If the second line is in the form, To my heart it may bring peace, no harm. Cheers to V.P.

As the breeze reaching you, it give u peace....you wonder how u can get it? Breeze was a harsh wind in the ocean...unpredictable situation, could be from storm too...but as it reaching a land, it finally slow down and be gentle again as breeze, ease all hard time before...so look that as your life, u are having trouble time like harsh emotion in the sea, relax till time is perfect you will meet your time to ease and peace like that breeze...feel the breeze around you, grasp the peace inside it and hold the message it give to u..stay bright VP_Unwritten Soul

Very good poem, my brother. I am so happy to see again new poems from you. I once read a book and it was talking about the four aspects of human life: One is the physical level or the body.Two is the heart and our emotional status. Three is the mind. Four is our soul. Our health (one) may give us problems and we may have little hope left in that area at a given point in time. Our emotions (two) may sometimes get the better of us and we may feel really desperate. Sometimes on rational level (three) our situation may seem hopeless. Sometimes we feel so desperate that we feel as if we lost our soul But rarely we have to despair on all four levels. I think that most of the time each of us have some blessings left at one or the other level. By truly appreciating our remaining blessings, the way to find love again and a ray of hope is often within reach. A firefly may be the forebode of a morning full of the brightest colours. Most of the difficulties in our life are here to make us stronger. Nothing is permanent. No matter how bad a situation it will be only temporary. Prayer really can help. Your poem was really provoking many thoughts, an excellent write. I pray for your strength and for more 'breezes' or 'fireflies' to come your way. (please read also my poem, y.... river meets desert)

a good poem, i like it

itz nice..with words flowing in rhythm..

Thought provoking, may the light of these thoughts dawn on all the 'evil' spirits to justify the the soothing breeze

The swaying of the words is very nice.

We are not going to lose all our hopes immediately, unless we are very stubborn not to look for a change. Every one of us have our own issues, but hanging on with old issues which should be discarded, is something not right. This person can feel the breeze and I hope that his wheezing will stop and bring him some hope.

this is something my mind to squeeze further to widen my horizon at ease..... :)