खुद को तू बेहाल न रख (Hindi) Poem by Rajnish Manga
खुद को तू बेहाल न रख (Hindi)
खुद को तू बेहाल न रख
जीवन में जंजाल न रख
खुद ही इसमें फंस जायेगा
अपने घर में जाल न रख
रोक लगा ले लोभ पे भाई
अंदर इतना माल न रख
मना किया था लाख तुझे
अरहर की तू दाल न रख
गोटी उलटी पड़ सकती है
नजूमियों का फ़ाल न रख
वक़्त की लाठी से तू डर
इतनी मोटी खाल न रख
A perfect poetry by all means. Perfect thoughts, perfect lines, perfect description, perfect on Persian (and Urdu) Urooz. The beautiful Bahar Faylun Faylun Faylun Faylun nicely used, , Rajnish Ji aap ke in Ashaar mein kahin sakta nahin kahin koi jhol nahin, yeh ek shahkar Ghazal hay.
You have rightly advised in this poem to block greed of a person. Greed is really very dangerous and root of all wrong doings. Very thoughtful sharing you have done....10
I am extremely thankful to you for visiting and appreciating my Hindi poem 'खुद को तू बेहाल न रख'. You have very kindly added your own impression on the subject. Thank you, Bhargabi Dei ji.
'खुद को तू बेहाल न रख' नामक शीर्षक की मेरी कविता को पसंद करने तथा उस पर अपने अमूल्य विचार रखने के लिये मैं आपका अत्यंत आभारी हूँ, अजय जी.
Nice words of wisdom, passed through generations, generally forgotten in the rat race...
Do not keep clumsiness in life and be free from stress. Do not have greed in life and be cautious towards time. Very amazing poem of awareness to modern society is shared with interesting expression...10
Thank you for writing such a wonderful critique on this poem 'खुद को तू बेहाल न रख'. Your comments have always inspired and encouraged me, Kumarmani Sahab. Please don't mind the delay on my part.
though I know hindi little....l find it is beautiful...and entertaining.. deep in thought..
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4/25/2024 5:41:24 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Bahut Khoob........Excess of anything is bad and in various ways you have put this nicely in each verses.......Kya baat hai Rajnishji....100+++ Ye ek dal dal hai, Jisme jo dashta hai wo dashta chala jaata hai.... I quote: रोक लगा ले लोभ पे भाई अंदर इतना माल न रख