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Rating: 5.0


A hall of four white walls under a roof
Window with a door touches afar sky
Full with books lick all the laden wits soup
Breeze comes from the legend tree of fair high

Fairy runs after fallow-deer on scene
Cupid exhorts the pen of love to dream
Flood of feelings rowing the boat of kin
The book of poems dances in full brim

Hot summer sum wakes me up in morning
And bright moon allows not to sleep deeply
No rhythm in my dreamy life to sing
The song of ever true friendship solely

Hither to thither I go find mirror
Where nothing exists only the self shore

30.06.2020 Chattogram

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 03 July 2020

A well penned fabulous poem. Simply splendid......10+++

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Indira Renganathan 13 July 2020

A nice flow of words in a good sonnet form.... a tinge of self pity and sadness at the ending lines....well crafted work- 10++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 July 2020

Hot summer sum wakes me up in morning And bright moon allows not to sleep deeply No rhythm in my dreamy life to sing The song of ever true friendship solely but u must also try

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 July 2020

A well written heartwarming poem. Simply sublime....10++

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 July 2020

Home! ! Descriptive! Hot summer sum! ! ! With the romance of your mind. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aarzoo Mehek 03 July 2020

Love the way you explore your surroundings with your words. One more gem from your pen. Compliments.

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