Humble Lamb Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Humble Lamb

Rating: 5.0

six o'clock
again and again
time comes back to me
definitely your buoyant dream
walks along crisis of identity of love
when you grasps those elegant emotion
I hope you can puts your illusion
into a distinctive magical box
which full of tenderness
and simply caresses
you may senses
at dusk

for a while two blind children are giggling on a pine corner
they can't turn around because their hearts are tied
with mischievous controversy and jigsaws
but when lunch time is coming
and no one is starving
a fox's
running and jumping
never again finds doleful melodies
O leaves of June sunshine whose hands are
golden and full with sweet candies and birthday cakes
never leave us in these holocaust days and shipwrecked places

spirit's so
windy and icy
when midnight comes
no more taverns left to open
just a lonely-pale innocent lamb
which ever pursued darkened parade
who seems to go without precious jewelry
who will send love to a jealousy queen
by the way you may listen to voice
of elusive species in lush forests
and sprinkling vast ocean
May Best Wishes
to our souls

(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Sangnam Nam)

Surya . 31 May 2009

very deep and impressive poem.posted 10 surya

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Mellifluous words ebbing and flowing of overflowing feelings.10.

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Ravi A 31 May 2009

A stunning poem. I see history repeating itself.

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Omar Ibrahim 31 May 2009

wow! ! ! the poem is stunning....and the shape as well...: D: D 10++

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Louis Rams 30 May 2009

in this i see history repeating itself in so many ways. and it is a nice dedication

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Seema Aarella 10 June 2009

each of us is a humble lamb, hope some unseen hand protects us always when we step into the dark dungeons and wild forests......nice one Ahmad! with a new emotion for each person u meet, u make ur page a concoction of variety All the best!

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Maria Sudibyo 02 June 2009

umm, i don't understand. but the words and shape are nice.

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Obinna Eruchie 02 June 2009

good for reading, it is.

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Meghan Pearson 01 June 2009

awww that was soo peaceful to read

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 01 June 2009

Another excellent dedication, it flows embracing much in meaning and imagery. Well thought out

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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