Hush! Ascetic in the wavy cowl
Holding forth the life's bowl.!
(Islamabad)
(June 15,2009)
hey....you have said too much in two lines! genius.compressed thoughts with a lot of meaning.best wishes. ritty.
well what can i say dear Sadaat, except thay someday I wish to rite such a short nice one for every one to enjoy.... never being good at haikus or short verses, , ! ! ! ! 10++ with love shan... hey pakistan are true for the semi finals in world cup///SL TOO Cheers! ! ! couldnt come oniline much cause of crikt...
Philosophical fun wisely versified...and thanks for your comment on mine Saadat
beautifully told in two lines. vivid imagery.you are really talented. voted10 surya
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
very vivid images, deep underlying meaning- open to individual interpretation. Mamta