I'm a lost moon in day
Like lost night in night
Lost as a light in light
I'm lost in your longing
But I am not lost in you
I am longing for a long
Longing for your smile
And for your rhymes
I'm longing for your eyes
But I am not lost in you
My wings of time is you
Smile in a night is you
Your a light in my light
I lost heart in your love
But I am not lost in you
Your ruling all my senses
Its blind and deaf for you
Makes me lost in longing
Yet I am I, who long to be
Me, myself and I but not you
‘…I'm lost in your longing // But I am not lost in you…’ Touchy and moving…enjoyed...thanks... Ms. Nivedita UK
nice visual metaphor very well combined with a double simile: I'm a lost moon in day Like lost night in night Lost as a light in light wonderful symbolistic poem 10+++++++++
what an ego of Narcissism alive in this present day's.... what a laugh my dear friend....so fantastic and eloquent in mood.... beautiful poem.... a God bless, a 10 with a big Star.....
you will get so lost in love, that you forget 'who you are'. that's the power of love. a gr8888t write. a ten, if ph allows mw to rate it. ph issues going on.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
quite touchy... very smooth and nice flow!