I Am I Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

I Am I

Rating: 5.0


I'm a lost moon in day
Like lost night in night
Lost as a light in light
I'm lost in your longing
But I am not lost in you

I am longing for a long
Longing for your smile
And for your rhymes
I'm longing for your eyes
But I am not lost in you

My wings of time is you
Smile in a night is you
Your a light in my light
I lost heart in your love
But I am not lost in you

Your ruling all my senses
Its blind and deaf for you
Makes me lost in longing
Yet I am I, who long to be
Me, myself and I but not you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prince Obed de la Cruz 19 December 2009

quite touchy... very smooth and nice flow!

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 19 December 2009

‘…I'm lost in your longing // But I am not lost in you…’ Touchy and moving…enjoyed...thanks... Ms. Nivedita UK

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Anju Addanki 18 December 2009

thats a good one cleverly penned

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Marieta Maglas 18 December 2009

nice visual metaphor very well combined with a double simile: I'm a lost moon in day Like lost night in night Lost as a light in light wonderful symbolistic poem 10+++++++++

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Antonio Liao 17 December 2009

what an ego of Narcissism alive in this present day's.... what a laugh my dear friend....so fantastic and eloquent in mood.... beautiful poem.... a God bless, a 10 with a big Star.....

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Seamus O Brian 19 June 2015

Very nice! I enjoyed this piece.

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Walterrean Salley 24 December 2009

Always stay true to self.

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Louis Rams 19 December 2009

p.s. it's not allowing votes. sorry

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Louis Rams 19 December 2009

p.s. it's not allowing votes. sorry

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Louis Rams 19 December 2009

you will get so lost in love, that you forget 'who you are'. that's the power of love. a gr8888t write. a ten, if ph allows mw to rate it. ph issues going on.

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