I Am I Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

I Am I

Rating: 5.0


I'm a lost moon in day
Like lost night in night
Lost as a light in light
I'm lost in your longing
But I am not lost in you

I am longing for a long
Longing for your smile
And for your rhymes
I'm longing for your eyes
But I am not lost in you

My wings of time is you
Smile in a night is you
Your a light in my light
I lost heart in your love
But I am not lost in you

Your ruling all my senses
Its blind and deaf for you
Makes me lost in longing
Yet I am I, who long to be
Me, myself and I but not you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Walterrean Salley 16 December 2009

Stay the course. Don't be distracted by life. Always be you. Beautifully crafted.

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Eyan Desir 16 December 2009

Its a good write... maybe you should of being a little clearer...10s

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Rajaram Ramachandran 16 December 2009

After many twists and turns, finally 'I am what I am' comes out. A nice poem.

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Catrina Heart 16 December 2009

a poem of self with great conviction, even there are presence of tides and wanders, firmness held you well...nice piece! ! !

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Padmapriya Boddapati 16 December 2009

We all feel we may lose our true self in our efforts to impress the ones we love.But love is never about turning into someone else. Our true self emerges stronger and brighter than before. Well expressed

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Seamus O Brian 19 June 2015

Very nice! I enjoyed this piece.

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Walterrean Salley 24 December 2009

Always stay true to self.

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Louis Rams 19 December 2009

p.s. it's not allowing votes. sorry

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Louis Rams 19 December 2009

p.s. it's not allowing votes. sorry

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Louis Rams 19 December 2009

you will get so lost in love, that you forget 'who you are'. that's the power of love. a gr8888t write. a ten, if ph allows mw to rate it. ph issues going on.

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