I see you my friend
Your pains, struggles and challenges
I have faced them with you
Yes,
I walk with you
Your ailments i have felt
Deep within these veins
Under my surface
...my internal
I see you my friend
I have heard you cry
And have cried with you
For my shoulders were
Sometimes not big enough
I have ached for you
I know your story, your legend
In this very heart
Beneath this skin
I have felt your sorrows
I remember the times
That you felt helpless,
Hopeless..
And in despair
Inside i was torn for you
When the wind blew west
And you had other plans
I felt the hollowness
Of your soul
When you finally gave in
I understood
But i beg you to live
Soilchild
R.I.P Pam Shabangu
A well written love tragic...............you beg him to live........so that you can live too! ! Keep writing Amy.Good job.
I think we all have had friends like this at one point in our lives. nice flow. I love the end. good job. Cryatal
Wonderful. The power of a real friend to see, hear and touch. Those who have such friends are rich indeed. I like this poem. Keep writing.
I was listening to Dark Matter by Porcupine Tree while I read this. It enhanced the mood of your poem. Very expressive.
So heartfelt Amy, penned smoothly with so much emotions into it...Hope to read more of your poems, waiting for the next.10
i love this poem it is truely great.i love every bit of it.it really touched my heart.
Amy - You share your genuine feelings in real context. This is the heart of true poetry. The right words will always come to you. Blessings - Cheryl
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
do you beg someone to live or leave?