I Breathe But Breathless I Live Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

I Breathe But Breathless I Live

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I can breathe when I go to your parlor
Through your smile, verbose speech,
Snow white teeth, fleshy skin, sweating
I can breathe thoroughly, coz love sheer

I can breathe when I go to the fresh nature
Hearing birds chirping, walking under the
Cloudy shadow, hearing river's rhythm
With fountain falling norm I breathe fair

But I can't breathe when I go through myself
Where I find varied customs of discrimination
Where I make an abode of hatred, vengeance
Barring love where I care so-called patrician pelf

I'm breathless in the reign of apartheid humanity
Breathless I'm dead alive to take taste my destiny

©Mahtab Bangalee
Chattogram
30/01/2023

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savita Tyagi 05 February 2023

Wonderfully worded poem. This inside and outside world can be such an entangled mess that finding peace is hard. Still I believe a good writer can find it while engaged in writing

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 February 2023

Finding peace is a fundamental right yet it is hard to find specially in a world full of discrimination, abuse and corruption. A meaningful and wonderful poem.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 02 February 2023

Equality. It is very difficult to attain such a mindset. Nice poem, Mahtab

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