I Deny! Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

I Deny!

Rating: 4.7


The wine of your love has left me baffled
Your poison of betrayal has left me crippled
O God! why do I have to go through this pain
I deny life's coercion into which I'am circled.

© Aarzoo Mehek

I Deny!
Saturday, December 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: betrayal,poison,wine
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 03 January 2016

It is part and parcel of life, pain, sorrow, happiness all come to us in combo pack without choices.....Nice poem.

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Dimitrios Galanis 10 January 2016

So nicely depicted.You have a real talent my lady.

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Howard Savage 26 December 2015

Power message concerning one's own inability or willingness to recognize the danger in what appears to be true love. great job.

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Aarzoo Mehek 27 December 2015

Thank you so much for your valuable feedback.

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Seema Chowdhury 27 December 2015

What comes from the heart touches the heart. well expressed.

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Nabakishore Dash 30 December 2021

Heart touching.Beautiful crafting.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 December 2021

The torture can be viewed in multiple dimensions! Betrayal is brilliantly portrayed here. To my favourite!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 December 2021

Pains and torture of women are brilliantly depicted in your poetry!

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Khairul Ahsan 12 December 2016

This is a great four liner that depicts the appeal of love as an addiction and the pain that accompanies it when it ends in betrayal. Thanks for sharing your thoughts so poetically.

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A compelling and creative cry that is both hurtful and helpful. Short but significant!

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