I Dreamt I Danced With You Poem by Valerie Dohren
I Dreamt I Danced With You
Last night I dreamt I danced with you -
We Waltzed between the stars
Then Quickstepped through the asteroids
Passed Jupiter and Mars.
I wore a gown of crimson silk
And you a waistcoat bright -
Glittering ‘cross the star-filled dome
We danced through all the night.
With eyes that met and cheek-to-cheek
Enfolded in your arms -
Your hand upon my slender waist
Enraptured by your charms.
We Samba’d in the twilight hours
Together with such grace -
On clouds of ether floating high
We Tango’d on through space.
Then falling down to earth again
We Cha-Cha’d round the moon -
And as the music filled the void
I felt our bodies swoon.
Last night I dreamt I danced with you
But now the dream has gone
Yet in my heart the memory
Shall linger on and on.
What a gorgeous dream you had! The way you narrate your poem, it feels like we've been dancing with you. A lovely flight of fancy; esp like the crimson silk gown and quickstepping through asteroids!
What a gorgeous dream you had! The way you narrate your poem, it feels we've been dancing with you. A lovely flight of fancy. Love the crimson silk gown and quickstepping through asteroids!
Stunning dance of words capturing a vivid and serene dream that entrances! !
Such a beautiful imagery Valerie remembering dancing with beloved took me or dragged me in a diff. world.A lovely poem in deed. Thank you.
Valerie this poem made me feel the joy of waltzing with the sunrise and tango with the sunset. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful poem!
Last night I dreamt I danced with you But now the dream has gone Yet in my heart the memory Shall linger on and on. this is amazing. you are a gem Val, the way you write, everybody cant do that. :)
Bursting with a beauty that can awaken dreams into reality of poetic perfection! Excellently expressed my friend!
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I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 12:40:03 PM # 1.0.0
The most wonderful dances we dance in our imagination. If we manage to stick a bit of it in our memory and pluck and here and there a flake of it it will brighten our life and that of others Fantastic poem, Val.